i feel
i just want to fly
it must be the most,
the most supurb thing.
to climb above the air
and eat the sky
to dream, i feel
to think, i feel
i love human reaction
to stimuli and passion,
beyond our composure.
its here and now
and i embrace it
to think, i feel
to dream, i feel
Posted: January 26th, 2008 under poetry, writings.
Comments
Comment from Jon-o
Time January 30, 2008 at 1:06 am
Cabe your amazing at writting these poems.. the stimuli part.. yeah i can see the Cabestir in that..!! i mean i think it’s pretty good and i can feel it…
Comment from Dylan
Time February 6, 2008 at 3:10 pm
I agree with Madre and the word selection. I really like:
to climb above the air
and eat the sky
Its such a great description and when I read it, it puts me above the clouds.
Comment from Michelle
Time January 26, 2008 at 4:04 am
I really like this poem. Good choice of words.
Love,
Mom